There’s no doubt that families are more important than friends. Imagine a life without anyone to care for you, provide shelter and play with you when you are stuck at home. Therefore families are here to provide everything for you.
Imagine starving at the side of the streets with maggots filling your scars and starving. Well, parents are here to provide everything for you. For instance, you came first place in a marathon your family will always be beside you supporting you as you cross the finish line and give you some water to drink. Families also give you education at home and they send you to school.
Parents also provide shelter for you to live in and protect you, a bed for you to sleep on. Parents are also an important part of how you succeed in life by always inspiring you, discipline you to make you become a better person, they support you to make you succeed and they are always a great example. (https://baggout.com/blog/2016/06/03/top-10-ways-in-which-our-parents-help-us-succeed-in-life/, 2020 ) For example, if you have badly hurt yourself the only people that care about you are parents.
Some people might say that friends can also play with you, however, if you are stuck in quarantine you can’t go out and play with your friends so the only people you can play with are with your family members. Family members also go on fascinating trips with you like taking you overseas or on the boat or to the beach.
Overall families play a significant part in our life because they care for you both mentally and physically!
Your writing is really effective, Caleb. I like how you included a range of examples and persuasive language. Writing about why your family is important to a person can be a useful reminder for everyone staying home right now :)
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