The Creepy mako shark swims quickly though the coral reef scanning for fish.The mako shark’s eyes are as small as a marble.The mako sharks big teeth are as big as a megalodon it nose is as pointed as a very sharp pencil.The tail looks like a boomerang gliding through the cleansing

The  ocean seems never ending and are shirming

book review

The book called Tom gates is an exciting book written by  L.Pichon. It a action packed children's book subtle for ages 7 to  10.

L.Pichon has used vibrant colours, amusing language and very funny pictures to entertain the readers that read his awesome books he’s created.

My favorite part is when  Tom got in trouble and there is a spy pen for sale and is friend Dreck is not and in trouble but Dreck does not let him use then Tom asks why can't he use it because you just need to read the story.  The book has excellent excuses that you can borrow to not do homework.YAHOO!!!  No morehome to do forever(hope so) Well won’t happen to me I guess.  

Overall I will give it a 5 star rating and I think it is definitely worth a read.

blue
Blue looks like the morning sky it also looks like the swishing and swaying blue oceane
Blue taste like the refreshing water that i drink on 
Blue feels icy cold ice melting on a hot day
Blue sounds like waves crashing onto the shore
Blue reminds me of the bluefin tuna at the blue ocean.

speech

Speech Judging Sheet

Name:    Caleb            Topic: Jetpacks are Awesome!                   

Category	Main Points	Self Assessment
		Low                                         High
		1           2 3           4 5
Structure	My speech was organised logically into paragraphs, with an effective introduction and a conclusion.	3
Delivery	I used some gestures, stood still and made eye contact with my audience. My voice was clear and loud.  I didn’t speak too quickly or too slowly.	5
Content	My speech had a message and was original, interesting and relevant to the audience.	2.5
Language	I used ‘powerful’ words in my speech.  I also included some language features (eg repetition, alliteration, similes etc)	4
Time	My speech was between 2 ½ and 3 ½ minutes long.	1

Next time I need to

Not speak that fast.

Teacher Comment

Well done Caleb, you used some good eye contact and hand gestures.  Your next steps are to use more expression and slow down when you are speaking.